Beaker
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Note: Messages slow on weekends, I work then. :P
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Post by Beaker on Jun 19, 2014 18:48:42 GMT
Because I'm sure I'll have many of comments to add to this specific forum, there is no point in spamming the board and I'll just update and add to this thread. In advance, I apologize for any misspellings. I have two birds who often inhabit my keyboard along with me, and either sit on my fingers, or attack them as I type. xD First Impression While I'd like to assume and really hope that people would get past their first impression of appearance to play the game for it's actual purpose (the gameplay), this is sadly not the case. People take a look at a site, and if the art isn't up to par, the layout not user friendly/catchy.. they leave. Sad as it may be.
So onto my suggestion/review: The site layout is very nice, the art is phenomenal. However, the banner may be a bit too big to have to scroll down to the content every time you click to a new page. As far as the "news" section when you visit there, the colors of the news updates are a bit too clashing/dark to not only read, but comprehend data from. While I love chat boxes, unless the page is going to be stretched a bit more, the text needs to be smaller within the chat box so it doesn't look so squished. The links on the layout are read-able, which is great, but if you want the logo (the site's name's text) to stand out you may want to try using a different font for the links.
Overall, the color scheme is great and the layout runs very smooth. Those are just first impression suggestions I have to help out. You don't have to take my advice, as it's merely suggestions. I am just trying to be as helpful as possible.
Fixed! With the new layout a lot of the fore-mentioned issues I proposed will be fixed. While I'm sure new issues will arouse, at least this will work for now. Events Now I know a sim with a lot of interactive events is always one that'll not only keep it's users busy, and entertained, but heck it's fun! So as I come up with some I'll be sure to add them here for you guys to read and review.
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Post by Direct on Jun 19, 2014 20:43:29 GMT
If you would like to message me with some Color Hex codes, I would love that We haven't so much come up with a dominant "LOGO" per-say, I will probably have a contest for it when we reach beta stage.
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Beaker
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Post by Beaker on Jun 19, 2014 22:09:08 GMT
It only took a few hours, but this is what I came up with..
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Beaker
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Post by Beaker on Jun 19, 2014 22:26:24 GMT
Example with the chat box.
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Beaker
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Note: Messages slow on weekends, I work then. :P
Posts: 22
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Post by Beaker on Jun 19, 2014 23:49:26 GMT
Preview modes. :3 To show versatility.
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Post by Ablaze on Jun 19, 2014 23:58:13 GMT
Very nice beaker. Have you tested those on mobile devices?
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Beaker
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Note: Messages slow on weekends, I work then. :P
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Post by Beaker on Jun 20, 2014 0:04:24 GMT
Actually I don't code. These are all just .psds However, I can make a mobile layout.
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Post by Ablaze on Jun 20, 2014 2:48:28 GMT
Oh! I should have assumed that lol sorry. Its very nice though.
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Beaker
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Post by Beaker on Jun 20, 2014 2:50:31 GMT
Ablaze I can send both you and Direct the .psd for these. And I could make a mobile version. Would be fairly simple.
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Post by Ablaze on Jun 20, 2014 13:35:13 GMT
xD Direct is the one who approves this type of thing, so if Direct approves, feel free to send it to me and I'll start coding when my current list goes down.
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Post by Direct on Jun 20, 2014 14:16:46 GMT
I approve of the first one. I think the plain brown back mades it simple and not too distracting
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Post by Pandala on Jun 20, 2014 16:14:00 GMT
I hope my two cents is allowed because.... I love it! I do have a little suggestion though. The logo of the site name looks an awful lot like that of another game. It's different yes, but since they don't seem to realize NOTHING under this Sun is original, I would suggest changing it to the one we have currently on the front page OR make something new. We've already been demonized as a 'copycat game' on their site, and they'll probably stalk the site to see what else they can claim are copies of their ideas. I would just hate to give them more ammo and an even more solid reason to dislike the game D': With all that said though, great work! I can tell you put some serious thought into this and it shows, truly! I want to feel proud to be a part of this game from its Alpha beginnings (wish I knew of this a few years ago but I randomly found this site on the inter-webs a few months ago) and this, plus all the amazing updates from Abalze with help from Direct, is making me even HAPPIER that I can watch it all come together. I hope my suggestion above doesn't make you feel disheartened, I just really really care about this game and don't want ANYONE to be able to say anything different.
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Beaker
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Note: Messages slow on weekends, I work then. :P
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Post by Beaker on Jun 20, 2014 17:09:42 GMT
I hope my two cents is allowed because.... I love it! I do have a little suggestion though. The logo of the site name looks an awful lot like that of another game. It's different yes, but since they don't seem to realize NOTHING under this Sun is original, I would suggest changing it to the one we have currently on the front page OR make something new. We've already been demonized as a 'copycat game' on their site, and they'll probably stalk the site to see what else they can claim are copies of their ideas. I would just hate to give them more ammo and an even more solid reason to dislike the game D': With all that said though, great work! I can tell you put some serious thought into this and it shows, truly! I want to feel proud to be a part of this game from its Alpha beginnings (wish I knew of this a few years ago but I randomly found this site on the inter-webs a few months ago) and this, plus all the amazing updates from Abalze with help from Direct, is making me even HAPPIER that I can watch it all come together. I hope my suggestion above doesn't make you feel disheartened, I just really really care about this game and don't want ANYONE to be able to say anything different. Critique is what helps us all improve. Do you have any suggestions of another way we could do a logo? I'd be happy to create another one. ^^
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Post by Pandala on Jun 20, 2014 17:34:20 GMT
Thanks Beaker <3 As I said the original (below, but without the AWD silhouettes behind the lettering) would be nice but I can see how, with a darker background behind it, it can be hard on the eyes. I really really like the font of the world 'WILD' in your logo version. Would it look silly if the whole logo was like that? I'm sure you're more knowledge in this department than me so please excuse my ignorance ^^;
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Post by Direct on Jun 20, 2014 18:32:36 GMT
Can I see the whole logo in that type of font?
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