Post by Direct on Sept 2, 2013 14:32:24 GMT
::Opinions on my paper about washing a dog? It is pretty random and supposed to be descriptive. ::
Soap and bubbles sprawled randomly across the grassy backyard. The bubbles slowly dropped, each being murdered by the sharp blades of grass. The petite girl with loving hands wrapped them around the thick fur of her dog, Bear, ensnaring him like a cocoon. Her heart belongs to this monster fuzz ball, and he was sworn to her. Their reflection slowly rippled through the slightly dirty water, sliding down Bear’s thick fur at ease. Bear emerged from the water, and began to shake the excess water from his dense coat. The girl squealed, shielding her eyes from the tiny water bullets heading right for her. Bear proudly trotted around, his fur now darkened from the density of the water. His dark almond eyes hazily focused on the girl, instantly drawn to the one he loves. She cascaded her hand along his back, running her fingers through his plush fur. She enveloped him in her arms, securing Bear with an easy smile. She could hear the soft sighs of each hefty pant he took. It was that equality that made them a unit. She messed with the tags dangling from his bright red collar. When she picked up the long matching red leash, Bear couldn’t contain his enthusiasm. Water splattered all over and Bear began to leap from enjoyment. His massive paws crunched the leaves, creating a crackling murmur. He bounded towards the gate, thumping his paws with the ground each step he took. Bear leapt against the gate, colliding with a slightly broken piece. He collapsed his paw rapidly pushing out the broken post. He yowled in shock, shattering the silence of the day. The birds escaped the scene as if they were responsible for the pain of the dog. Laughter echoed through the yard, bellowing from the petite girl who collapsed on the ground, laughing excessively.
Soap and bubbles sprawled randomly across the grassy backyard. The bubbles slowly dropped, each being murdered by the sharp blades of grass. The petite girl with loving hands wrapped them around the thick fur of her dog, Bear, ensnaring him like a cocoon. Her heart belongs to this monster fuzz ball, and he was sworn to her. Their reflection slowly rippled through the slightly dirty water, sliding down Bear’s thick fur at ease. Bear emerged from the water, and began to shake the excess water from his dense coat. The girl squealed, shielding her eyes from the tiny water bullets heading right for her. Bear proudly trotted around, his fur now darkened from the density of the water. His dark almond eyes hazily focused on the girl, instantly drawn to the one he loves. She cascaded her hand along his back, running her fingers through his plush fur. She enveloped him in her arms, securing Bear with an easy smile. She could hear the soft sighs of each hefty pant he took. It was that equality that made them a unit. She messed with the tags dangling from his bright red collar. When she picked up the long matching red leash, Bear couldn’t contain his enthusiasm. Water splattered all over and Bear began to leap from enjoyment. His massive paws crunched the leaves, creating a crackling murmur. He bounded towards the gate, thumping his paws with the ground each step he took. Bear leapt against the gate, colliding with a slightly broken piece. He collapsed his paw rapidly pushing out the broken post. He yowled in shock, shattering the silence of the day. The birds escaped the scene as if they were responsible for the pain of the dog. Laughter echoed through the yard, bellowing from the petite girl who collapsed on the ground, laughing excessively.
